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CET46的作文推荐骨架
先要强调一下，CET6考图表作文的几率大，CET4考记叙文的概率大。这个主流要先说明的。我不押题，但我押框架。以下所有的框架供大家参考，考虑到大部分朋友都时间有限，所以我尽量把框架的字写多点。怕撞车的朋友，可以在各篇文章中挑几句重新排列组合。
图表式带数字比较的作文（1）
As is described in the bar chart,(图表的总述).Figures indicate that(趋势1），and（趋势2）。
There are at least three good reasons for(图表总述的另一个种表达）。
In the first place,it is generally assumed that(理由一）。Secondly,with the open and reform policy being carried out,(某个短语）has a great influence on（原因）。Last but not least,today an increasing number of people are realizing that(某个原因的重要性 ）。Maybe there are some other reasons to show（图表述第三种表
达），but it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly acceptable.
From this point of view,it goes without saying that(措施）。We are looking forward to a much better and brighter future.
评注：这个框架是送给那些对作文信心不大的朋友们。我框架的内容已经有90几个字了，只需要大家填补40-50个字就够了。
图表式作文带数字比较，并希望提出建议的作文 （2）
As is depicted in the cartoon,(图表的总述）。For one thing，（趋势一）。For another,(趋势2）。It is interesting to note that(趋势三）。
My suggestions to tackle the problem are as follows.First of all,with the rapid development of science and technology,an increasing number of people come
to realize that(意见一），this is because（原因）。Secondly,(意见二）。
Therefore,we should attach great significance to solving the problem.
As far as I'm concerned,it is high time that (某个组织或人）must make intensive efforts to（采取什么行动）。Although we still have a long way to go,I
am sure that tomorrow will be much better and brighter.
评注：上一篇是着重强调原因，这篇是原因和改善的措施并进的。还是考虑到大家时间紧迫，所以这篇的框架词也有90以上。
大家很强烈要求的议论文写法（3）(我采用新式写法，和旧的不同）
It is generally believed that (事件）is a hot topic which is widely talked
about at home and abroad.Some people think that(想法一）。Others argue that(想法
二）。Still others assert that（想法三）。
As a popular saying goes"Everything has two sides".There is no denying that(什
么had contributions to什么）。But it is partial to stress only one side.we should debate the matter pro and con.Though（什么好的事情已经发生），they are responsible for a lot of(不好的事情）。From what I have mentioned above we can see clearly that(结论）。
In short,we should keep in mind that(全文的结论）。We are looking forwarding to a promising future.
评注：这篇文章的框架CET46都可以拿过去改头换面。一般这样的文章，大多数人都会第一段写2意见，然后说自己的意见。第2段说3个理由。我就是为了打破这个瓶颈，所以在第一段列了3个理由，然后第2段从正反两方面论证。力求新意。这篇文章我拼了很多东西，也是我老喜欢的议论文的写法
图表带数字的描述（举2篇比较经典文章的开头）
Since China opened its door to the outside world in 1979, Beijing has made
remarkable results in attracting foreign business to invest in joint ventures.
According to the pie chart, the investors in different enterprises come from 26
countries and regions. The investment of Hong Kong ranks first, accounting for
44 per cent of the total. Japan's investment makes up 19.2 per cent, putting
it in second spot. Third is the United States at 16 per cent.
评注：这篇文章是说北京地区吸引外商投资的，是一块饼图，然后首段要大家描述。
我简单分析一下，第一句只要把北京换成our country，然后是百搭。第2句的开头是常用土图表作文的框架，后面部分看看，考试碰不到同样的文章。后面的三句描写手法是我要着重推荐的。第三句用了accounting for，第四句用了make up，第5句用了at。这3个词都有“占多少百分比”的意思。如果考到这类的作文能用上这3个字，再加上漂亮的首句。老师的第一印象很定来。从第二段开始，按照前面的表格，大家慢慢套
As is shown by the graph, the rate of car accidents in the city varied from
month to month in 2002. During the period from Jan. to Mar., the number of
accidents grew sharply, reaching 32 in March. Then the rate began to decline,
and there were only 26 accidents in June. However, there was a rapid increase
during the summer months, the peak being 39 accidents in August. Fortunately,
the rate was gradually falling in the last four months of the year. It is
interesting to note that there happened to be as many accidents in Oct. as
those in Apr. Generally speaking, the trend involved a downward direction.
评注：这篇文章是说一年12个月，每月的车祸数量。我要推荐的除了表示“占百分比”的表达外，还要介绍如果描写趋势的。如果是上升，那可以用grew sharply,on the ris,be a rapid increase.如果是下降,可以用begin to decline,be gradually falling.如果考试是用曲线表示趋势的话，那能用上这5个次中的任意3个，文章就有色彩了。
成功和失败的关系
As you know, whatever we do, there are always two possible results: success and
failure. We should try hard to strive for success and at the same time do our
best to avoid failure. We should rely on our own efforts to win the victory. We
have no reason to look to any accidental gain. We should always keep in mind
that industry is the mother of success and perseverance holds the key to it.
评注：这段是描述成功和失败的关系。第二句中strive for和do our best to，一个用短语，一个用强调语气，可以借鉴。We have no reason to look to也是一个好句子，我们没有理由去期待什么， We should always keep in mind that industry is the mother of success and perseverance holds the key to it。这句是百搭，前面是个短语开头句，可以借鉴，后面一句是成语，一句是讲道理。记不住可以就记一句旅游业的发展
Tourism, a "smokeless industry", is developing rapidly in China. With the open
and reform policy being carried out, thousands upon thousands of foreign
visitors are crowding into our country. They are eager to see this old
mysterious land with a splendid culture of more than 5000 years.
Tourism brings China a lot of benefits. First it enables the Chinese people to
know more about the outside world and promotes friendship and mutual
understanding. Second, it is financially beneficial to China, which needs more
foreign currencies for its modernization program.
这篇文章的第一端，CET4可以借鉴。。不管什么在中国的发展，都可以看成是无烟的工业，然后就是改革开放的套话。第2段主要是针对给中国带来的好处。如果考试中有外国到中国来消费的，不管是什么原因来消费，好处都可以是这2个科技类文章的写法（我采用正反结合的方法）
Science and technology have brought about tremendous changes in people’s life.
Scientific researches continue to open up previously undreamed of
possibilities. Fifty years ago, few people could even imagine things like
computers, space—shuttles. Now all these newly emerging technologies are
benefiting people all over the world. In a word, advancing science and
technology have made man master of the globe.
As is known to all, everything has two coins. When we are enjoying the
remarkable wonders which science and technology have brought us, we are
suffering at the same time from a lot of troubles, such as environmental
pollution, noise, green—house effect and the danger of nuclear wars. Let’s
take cars for examples. They not only pollute the air in the city, but also
make our roads overcrowded. Moreover, they are responsible for a lot of traffic
accidents, which bring grave consequences both to the country and to victim’s
families. As a result, we should not underestimate the other side brought by
the progress of science and technology.
这篇文章的第一段我是建议大家看熟的。因为不管是什么文章，在生活中给我们带来好处的原因，我归纳就三条：改革开放；科技进步；文明提高。如果说改革开放，前面的文章对次强调了，这里不说了。文明提高，明后天再说。这里让大家看看科技进步提高生活如何说。从第2段到第3段，是让害怕写科技类文章的朋友借鉴的，我从正反论述，再加个举例。如果已经熟悉用框架的朋友，那完全可以按照框架（3）去写
关于具体措施的，多数情况下可以套的文章（以保护森林为例）
My suggestions to deal with problem are as follows. In the first place,we
should appeal to the government to set up a foundation to reward thost do much
to protect resources. Secondly, those who cut down trees in a forest at radom
must be punished by the law. Finally,it is necessary to encourage city-
residents to plant as many trees as possible in and around the city. We are
looking forward to a much better and brighter future.
评注：这篇文章的解决办法的模式是我想推荐的。第一步，呼吁。第二步，惩罚。第三步，奖励。如果考到假冒伪劣产品，也可以套吧，如果考到经济发展，那也可以饶到企业的诚信和the public的监督。反正只要和“保护”有关的，都可以用这饿模式
现在网上都说考SARS很热，但我觉得不会考，毕竟也有反押题。但我文章还是贴两篇。
从野生动物推到SARS
Chinese people have a long tradition of eating all sorts of “delicious
foods”, including wild animals or plants. As illustrated in the picture, a
group of people seated around a big table, which is already covered with all
sorts of wonderful food, are expecting another “ big” course. To everyone’s
surprise, the waiter pushes in a cage containing an angry bear. Obviously, the
bear’s paws, which are considered a delicacy in China, will be the next course.
This habit of eating wild animals is deeply rooted in Chinese food culture for
Chinese people believe that wild animals are really nutritious as well as
tasty. But people may not realize that this habit is harmful both to themselves
and to biological environment. People may be infected with lethal bacteria or
viruses by eating wild animals, which is demonstrated by the terrible SARS
claiming thousands of lives in the world this spring. Also, hunting and eating
wild animals disturbs the biological balance of the nature, which is already
threatening the existence of human beings on the earth.
Therefore, special care must be taken to ensure that this habit is terminated.
On the one hand, the government may have to establish laws to forbid the
hunting and eating of wild animals. On the other hand, the public should uproot
this bad habit themselves. Surely, if people from all walks of life pay enough
attention to this problem, our life will be more healthy and enjoyable.
用团结就是力量推到SARS
It is widely recognized that solidarity can help mobilize all the available
forces to conquer all the difficulties. As illustrated in the picture, a
clenched fist , which symbolizes solidarity, looks so big and powerful. It is
meant to show that however challenging or difficult a task is, the powerful
fist will definitely crush it to pieces.
The value of solidarity has been proved numerous times. In the spring of 2003,
for instance, SARS hit China and claimed hundreds of lives. It threatened the
smooth development of Chinese economy and the social stability. In the face of
the danger, national government called on Chinese people, especially the
doctors and nurses, to be united together to fight and defeat the disease, and
the SARS was crushed immediately. Another example is the successful launch of
Shenzhou-5 in Oct.,2003. It was obviously the result of combined efforts of
generations of scientists, engineers, astronauts and ordinary workers. It was
also certainly the result of national government’s guidance, the public
support and the booming economy. In a word, the success was based on the
solidarity of all China’s social forces.
In my opinion, only solidarity can ensure our success in all respects. Most
probably we’ll meet with many other difficulties in the future development of
our country. But I’m confident that we can overcome them with solidarity and
achieve our success in every respect.
我再次表明我的观点，SARS考的可能性很小很小。但文章大家可以看看，觉得好的句子就去背，各取所需 |
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